Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Positives and Negatives of My Op-Ed Article

My op-ed article did indeed have its many ups and downs. And although I didn't think that I could have had enough time to do even a very quick spellcheck, I still think that I did very well on it. Basically the only negative that I had on my rubric was to apply a much greater use to my rhetorical techniques in my op-ed article. Since I only managed to put in about 2 or 3 of them in, I was struggling on where and when to put them into my op-ed article. However, from my perspective, I seemed to carry a lot of logos in it too. 

However, my op-ed article had a lot of positive things too! In my rubric I had always kept my use of informal register very consistent, and very on cue. For me, that was one of the points I tried to focus the most on. Since I had a lot of facts in my op-ed article, I tried to put a lot of my own opinions into it in order to keep the readers interested in what I thought of the information, but also not boring them to death with fact, after fact, after fact. 

In conclusion, my op-ed article is not perfect. No ones is. But it could use some work too! So I am going to keep on trying hard to reach my goals, and make my efforts go sky high. And anyways, this feedback might be a good place to start. Right? 

Well, that's it for this blog post! Until the next one! Bye! 

  

Sunday, November 25, 2012

The Art Of Persuasion

Pathos:

Link is here. This is a Domino's Pizza Turnaround advertisement. Which shows on how the employees at Domino's pizza take their criticizes into account, and they manage to perform the ultimate pizza turnaround.

Ethos:


This image shows on how the point of view of this person shows on how much he cares about the subject of water towards the rest of the world.

Logos:


This is a very liable example of the use of logos. It shows the most important factors of how to sell a product through business.

Well, that's the end of this blog post! Until the next one! Bye!